Description writing

W.A.L.T create a blog about our descriptive piece of writing we did today.

Today's writing task was to describe a person or object with our senses. The person I choose was Shrek.
-First we had to think about who we were going to write about.
-Next we had to describe what/ who we were writing about.
-Finally we put our name on it then handed it in.
Here is my writing:

What I think I did well was describe Shreks looks

I think I could improve on my handwriting 

I will use this in my writing when I am describing a character or person.

Do you have any feedback?

Matariki star art

W.A.L.T create a blog about the art we have been working on lately.

For the last week we have been working on our matariki art this is how we did it.
-First we got given one big star and one small star to trace on a piece of A3 paper.
-Next we had to draw some patterns and designs on our stars in pencil.
-Then we coloured in the designs (as you can see I left some of mine blank).
-After that we cut them out and stuck the on a A3 black piece of paper.
-Finally we cut the black piece of paper into a centimetre boarder.
Here is my star.

Reflection
I enjoyed colouring in the patterns on my star and getting it done.

Have you done matariki art yet?