Today's writing task was to describe a person or object with our senses. The person I choose was Shrek.
-First we had to think about who we were going to write about.
-Next we had to describe what/ who we were writing about.
-Finally we put our name on it then handed it in.
Here is my writing:
What I think I did well was describe Shreks looks
I think I could improve on my handwriting
I will use this in my writing when I am describing a character or person.
Do you have any feedback?
Kia ora Desiree,
ReplyDeleteI am Morgan from St Mary’s School.
I really liked how you added a photo of you learning.
I learnt that you can do descriptive writing.
This is a great blog
Mā te wā
Morgan
hi Desiree I really like your post it is really good I like that you did it about Shrek next time try add a bit more but its still really good.
ReplyDeletethank you for your feedback guys it really helped me!
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