W.A.L.T upload our writing task and write about it.
Last week we had to learn about commas. We did a couple of lessons about commas to learn about how to use them and where to put them. After those few little lessons, we got given a task to make either a poster or animation with a buddy or two to teach children where to use them. I choose to make an animation with Peyton and Anika here is our animation.
What I enjoyed was adding in Squidward because he looks funny.
What I did well was add in some humour to make it more interesting because normal is boring.
What I could improve on is adding more places that you can put commas in.
Do you like our animation?
Kia ora Desiree,
ReplyDeleteI am Morgan from St Mary’s School.
I really liked how you made an animation in slides.
I learnt how you use my commas properly.
Maybe you could try and add more to your slides.
And yes I liked you animation is was very interesting to watch.
Mā te wā
Morgan
Kia ora Desiree,
ReplyDeleteThis is Jaimie here from Te Waka Ako at Waikowhai Primary School.
This is a great and creative way to show your learning! I loved that you added a bit of humour into the animation, too. On the slide that said "please stand by", I was actually fooled by it at one time! It was great how you had different examples of where to put commas, too. Maybe next time, you could make an animation about all the different places to put commas?
I loved your animation. Did you enjoy making this? Was it easy or hard?
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Kia ora Desiree,
ReplyDeleteThis is Austin here from Te Waka Ako at Waikowhai Primary School. This is a great and creative way to show your learning! I loved that you added a bit of humour into the animation, too. On the slide that said "please stand by", I was actually fooled by it at one time! It was great how you had different examples of where to put commas, too. Maybe next time, you could make an animation about all the different places to put commas?
I loved your animation. Did you enjoy making this? Was it easy or hard?
Blog ya later!